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The Bloodline System by TimVic

In a future timeline, the earth was visited by a species known as the Slarkovs.
Having lost... Read more
In a future timeline, the earth was visited by a species known as the Slarkovs.
Having lost their home planet and in search of a new one, earth was the next habitable planet for them.

Humans and Slarkovs made a deal with each other in return for the Slarkovs living on earth.
The Slarkovs traded their technology and knowledge for a new home.
They were similar to humans except for some of them who had slight differences so fitting into the society wasn’t a problem.
Over the years Slarkovs and humans began to mate with one another and reproduce offsprings.
This in turn created a new species known as the mixed-blood.
Centuries later mixedbloods could tap into their bloodline and perform unimaginable feats.

Gustav born into an age where bloodline determines everything, struggles to fit with a useless bloodline.
His bloodline only grants him the ability to change his hair color, destroying his hopes and dreams for a great future.
His fate is turned around when an unexpected situation leads to him finding a system that grants him the power to unlock and upgrade bloodlines by completing quests but he’s baffled by two quests with a five-year deadline. Success will grant him unimaginable rewards…
But only one thing awaits him if he fails… Death!

Follow Gustav on his interesting journey filled with unprecedented adventures, danger and death, maybe? Collapse
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    I suggest not reading this, firstly, the start was absolutely awful, made me cringe. Secondly, the fml is ungodly annoying. Thirdly, the plot starts to become bs from the academy arc onwards, next, writing quality has definitely dropped by a lot, heck author even said that it is unedited maybe you can find the edited chapters elsewhere. Also, I find that the comedy genre on this novel does not make any sense. Finally, some events or characters in the novel are just irrelevant like fillers, a lot of mc friends mostly don't have much character development… this sucks, don't really get why it has a high rating evil puke eyetwit 19
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      Any similar bloodline changing novel???
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        Not too sure what you mean by bloodline changing, do you mean evolution? Or do you mean like changing race? Or perhaps just bloodline? Tho bloodline is kinda vague since it is usually a part of most novels
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    The author really could come up with a better turn off for the novel than the opening "intermission" scene.
    Trash.
    Dropped.
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    you know for a NOT HAREM novel it does get seriously involved with LOTS of females
    kiaa sigh
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    Stower
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    Meh 😑

    Give it a go see if it's for you is my moto.

    But this one's not for me
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    Mikhail Faizal
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    I f****** I dislike how the author uses the adjective "aloof" it could've been something else. An example of the author using aloof is
    like that doesn't make a lot of sense. When I think of aloofness I think of "staring into space" ( 23 ) but every time the author explains what he looks like they use "look of aloofness" and one time the author uses (basically) "His look of focus, his expression of aloofness, his wavy blonde hair." You cannot be focused and aloof? I am going to drop this novel.
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      Aloof can be used to describe someone as uncaring or unfriendly, or distant and uninterested. It doesn't really mean "looking off into space" as you put it.
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        Mikhail Faizal
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        It can, however the places where the author uses "aloof" could be used with a different word. Like the part where the mc gets charm. As people on webnovel also had something to say about it. They could've used "his cold expression" "his sharp expression" or something like that. It just doesn't feel right when they use aloof.
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          Oh yeah, he should definitely try to expand his vocab, on that I totally agree. I just wanted to make sure that you knew that it would be possible to use the word aloof there. 👍
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    This has one of the most trashiest and irritating beginnings I have read. Don't know how people were able to get through such idiotic mc. The whole "bullying" is extremely dumb. Its like the whole world has nothing else to do other than shit on mc. It would have been okay if it was leading to an evil mc who has given up hopes on this world and turns towards the dark side. But we have a useless and retarded mc with a huge hero complex. The whole bullying devolves into endless young masters getting into conflict with mc again and again just because he is trash and suddenly not being trash. They clearly saw him beating the shot out of quite a number of people but still think that he is trash.


    Mc is even worse than those shounen dense Japanese light novel protagonists. He suddenly has gotten a system and he fffing ignores it. It takes forever for him to even checkout what the system is and what advantages it can give him.

    Also authors fight description skills are awful. He doesn't know anything else than "hitting on the stomach"

    I just read further and it somehow gets worse. A freaking test takes close to a hundred chapters. This test has no real uses other than being just an entrance to an organisation. There is no underlying plot or interesting scenarios. It just a big bland dump.
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    very bland
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    Unfortunately I'll stop at 375, the work is already lost, every time a new annoying female character that will have no relevance is introduced and Mc's personality gets to be annoying man,only in webnovel even if after he humiliated Angy so much and she still runs after him, that doesn't exist, I'm stopping for the same reason I stopped God of the Naughty, I even got annoyed with these works with protagonists with a broken mind, if you save Escravo das Sombras, but that's because his personality improves by leaps and bounds, but this one always stays out of the way same way 🤦🤦🤦
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      Gott-höchste
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      Is Shadow Slave any good?
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        It's amazing, go for it !
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          Gott-höchste
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          Ok....
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            Just be warned that just as the title suggest, he will become a slave, but will not affect the story for now
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              Gott-höchste
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              I have patience reader
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    Aether999
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    The Romance ruined the story for me. I don't understand why authors are obsessed with choosing FML's that are annoying and hold back the MC. They try to force some sort of garbage character development but only succeed in making them more annoying. Not only that, this one is a massive hypocrite at well.
    You've been warned but other than that, its a pretty decent story ig
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      Did you seriously forget the part that the reason she was thinking like this was because of the virus. It was turning her in opposite nature of her real nature.
      Those dark thoughts were a side effect of the virus.
      Its written there in the story in bold letters.
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        Aether999
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        Must have been after I dropped it or was it just mentioned briefly? Still, doesn't change that her character itself is annoying and basically only serves to add unnecessary drama.
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          I'm with you on that unnecessary drama part. And that thing was mentioned briefly in Angy's inner monologue.
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            What’s the name of the fml
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              Angy.......
              Not sure because author hasn't made it clear.
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                I hate her tbh she’s annoying
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      I guess I dodged a bullet on this one pressure
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    A couple chapters in, around the 15ish chapter and the MC's highest stat is '»Intelligence: 4' as we are told he also performs well in general studies not related to mix-bloods such as math, english etc. However his actions don't conform to'»Intelligence: 4' he operates like an idiot, it might just be me who thinks this way.
    Everybody hates him and bullies him just for having a low-level bloodline even normal people which are said to be second class citizens, the author tries really hard for us to feel sorry for the Mc (abusive parents, bullied by brother, bullied by school mates, got beat up after confessing, despised by society etc) its too much honestly.
    I was reading some comments and people mentioned the story got worse after MC forgave is brother for trying to kill him ,furthermore it also mentioned that the love interest and relationship made it the novel worse. I'm asking if I should continue reading it has it has a relative high rating pressure
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      Mikhail Faizal
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      the author said that intelligence does not = smart, it = think faster
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