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Started with potential but quickly devolved into a meaningless r*pefest, and the mc is a huge bitch just like the author, who decided to write the novel just to highlight his hate for women. For real though, why even make it harem if the pleb mc is going to end up raping, insulting and beating the "heroines"? just go full r*tard and kill them as well, no need to bait harem readers with such trash development.
The whole "i-i was mentally damaged by them, that's why i'm acting like a subhuman incel!" is peak cope, the heroines from previous times were brainwashed by the prota's halo.

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Dreamwalker 19 Jan 2023, 18:35 ➥ Qyingying

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this... this so much this. this is literally it.

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TheLastSpearman 16 Jan 2023, 14:09

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I power through 20 ch because I'm bored out of my mind but goddamn I can't continue any longer.
Author is such a deranged incel with deep issues and insecurities and it is plastered all over the story, from how he views women to how he views sex in general (I'll bet a quintillion gazillion dollars author is still a child with no life experiences and no luck in his love life and a reddit/4chan user)

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ARamdomeUser 16 Jan 2023, 17:40 ➥ TheLastSpearman

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Dude chill your life. It is a story. Wey do everyone always assume the authors viewed are the same as there characters? (And yes I know maybe they do. There are a lot of f#cked up people on the internet. But just because someone writes this doesn't mean he is one.) Like seriously you saying that is f#cked up. I agree the sex scenes are shit and the story doesn't really make sense but still it is just a fantasy story. And wired enough this only comes up with novels involving sex, while noone does the same with outer Subjekts. Never seen anyone complain how the authors of "warlock of the magis word" or "reverend insanity" have to be psychopaths.
When you can't divide fiction from realty I think you are the childish one.
When you don't like it that is fine, but no need for personal hate against the author we know nothing about. That is just childish.

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  TheLastSpearman 17 Jan 2023, 04:03 ➥ ARamdomeUser
  
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  I think using Reverend Insanity or Warlock in the Magus World is precisely a bad example of your point, these books are good because they are clearly fiction and even tho the authors of these works may think x or y about any of the topics involved in their stories, they don't show it, instead they use their creativity and knowledge to plaster a vision, this author on the other hand is just projecting his horrible views of the topics touched in the novel and it is clearly visible as long as you don't think like him, like he gives the MC a power called "gigachad dick" or smth like that, the description is a "perfect size and girth" member but when depicted author say's a perfect size/lenght is 12 inches? Like common that is nothing but incel thinking about what is thought to be a "perfect size"
  And it may be a work of fiction but it is blatant how it's not a projection of how a "villain" would act but more like how the author would act in the MC's place, if you can't see that idk what to tell you my guy
  
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    ARamdomeUser 1 Mar 2023, 07:19 ➥ TheLastSpearman
    
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    I am rewiring this as I truly think what you said is very problematic and the previous one was a mess:
    
    It is a pice of fiction. That has nothing to do with realty. You are the one mixing it which makes it really f#cked up.
    You say how outers have ideas independent of there characters, but this author does not. You have no proof or any reson to believe it. It is a pure prejudice, because of the content of the work. Just because it is bad, while outers are written better, doesn't mean that it refects the author's viewpoint.
    And a comedic over exaggeration is proof of this? How? Like how is the related?
    The author may or may not be thinking like this but purely concluding this based on this novel just shows that you haven't really thought about it.
    
    I am really annoyed by this shit. A novel is not realty and yes, this is a overblown giant power and sex fantasy. And yes it is pretty badly written. But that in itself isn't a problem. It has literally nothing to do with the author's thinking. Anyone who concludes about someone's worldview based on a pice of fiction is just streight up making shit up without evidence.
    You are the one connecting it to realty without any reson.
    I read a lot of screwed up shit on the internet. Some people who make it are deranged outhers are completely normal. For most I don't know. But this unessary judging of people's characters based on fiction really causes problems.
    
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    LostImp 26 Mar 2023, 20:29 ➥ TheLastSpearman
    
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    That's your problem. You're confusing fiction with reality. Even you connect it with reality doesn't mean all girls have high moral compass.
    
    I would like to think, "Money doesn't matter." But it's simply untrue for 80% of the girls. Same with the gigachad d*ck, most girls will be curious. Same with guys liking bigger bo*bs.
    
    Incel sh*t is what most(average) guys look for. Same with me. I can't just vent my anger in reality. Rather this incel sh*t consoles me and takes away my negative feelings.
    
    I also wouldn't read someone's daily life with law abiding mindset. I would rather do something productive than reading some average guy stuff.
    
    At the end of the day, this novel wasn't meant for you. Rather for some burnt out guys looking to let their inner demons out. There are tons of the other novels out there for you to enjoy.
    
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    Ray433 1 Sep 2023, 15:20 ➥ TheLastSpearman
    
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    Well, if I am to be honest... judging a person as a whole just by a novel is excessive, no matter the content of the said novel. Fiction is ultimately just fiction. There are so many writers out there who write pretty gruesome stuff that you would think they were lunatics, but when you meet them, you find just another normal person going about their lives. Just my opinion. And I think misunderstood that the MC isn't just a 'villain', rather a person who went insane after repeating the same story 1000 times. If anything, if the MC acts like a typical a 'villain' then in my opinion the author would have failed. Not that it matters much as the novel and the story itself is horribly written...
    
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Jkz91 16 Jan 2023, 06:57

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I haven't read much, but it's quite brutal at the start. Still, I feel that the readers here judged this too hastily. Regardless of whether the sex scene is good or not, I'm just going to talk about the story first.

The MC is broken, and his mind is messed up due to repeated suffering, it's the same thing over and over again. The stress, resentment, and buildup of frustration will make many people go crazy. This is why he did what he did, the author also subtly explained his feelings, "Despair, darkness, emptiness, and loneliness." He is like Yoo Joonghyuk from Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, constantly regressing, which will cause anyone to turn crazy.

I feel that this novel has a chance to be better later. It's like the manhwa Silent War (My kingdom) or the novel Paragon of Sin. Both stories were brutal at first, but they later acquired so many fans. I'm not saying that this novel will be like those stories, but I feel that we can give it a chance to see how it goes.

Sex scene wise, I don't know much. I can't get turned on by text so I can't comment on it. Good or not, well, you decide.

I'll keep reading and keep track of this novel, and will update again on the result.

Edit at chapter 62: Okay guys. It's a waste of time. I know I said to give this a chance, but it was a dissapointment.

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Imperium 14 Jan 2023, 07:42

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lol

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IseCream 14 Jan 2023, 05:19

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Why this is on the front page, now I can not open this site when I am outside or at the workplace

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Bloodbath 15 Jan 2023, 17:30 ➥ IseCream

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Facts bro

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万古神帝Golden 13 Jan 2023, 17:13

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Bear in mind that there are torture scenes for anyone who is uncomfortable with that stuff.

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HoneySingh 13 Jan 2023, 15:39

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I am just here for the cover picture.

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Equinox37 13 Jan 2023, 21:19 ➥ HoneySingh

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Great minds think alike

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billyawn 13 Jan 2023, 14:39

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Pretty mid, just caught up with it sex scenes arent even that good 2 of them were quite literally copy and pasted, i thought i was imagining it cause i was tired, but nope it was the exact same with the exact same wording.
Overall 4.7/10

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MMA_SirOwlbie 13 Jan 2023, 13:28

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Subpar R18 rape-fantasy rubbish, tbh. The R18 shit isn't even good, the characters are paper-thin, and my time would be better spent reading... honestly, reading almost anything else. Newspapers. Posters. People's Tinder exchanges. Porn site comments.

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Mr3twy 14 Jan 2023, 00:03 ➥ MMA_SirOwlbie

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not the porn site comments 😭😭

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  MMA_SirOwlbie 14 Jan 2023, 09:37 ➥ Mr3twy
  
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  they can be life-changing.
  but also sometimes dick-softening.
  
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    Supreme_Ancestor 18 Jan 2023, 12:57 ➥ MMA_SirOwlbie
    
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    *checks profile pic*
    *Nods in aggrement*
    
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ID:entity:Kelvin 13 Jan 2023, 12:02

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No just NO

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