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Chapter 1: Prologue

Sin has always stuck with humans since ancient times. No matter who it is, humans always commit sins in their life. 

It is as that already becomes law and norm of the world itself. Even the heroes, king, or other righteous people also could not escape from committing sins.

But what happens if it happens to the strongest person that only wants peace. Does he will escape from the evil clutches of sin or he will break through it.

Year XXXX

"Huft… Huft… Brother, Why?" What have I done to you? To poison me like this?!" [???]

"Kukuku…. Uhuk… What you did is take everything for me!! Uhuk.. Now, come and die." As the other person attacked him once again despite his injuries.

"Nonsense! I never take anything from you?! I always give everything to you, brother!!" [???]

"Shut it, Angus! Shut the fuck up! If you want to give me everything then how about give me your life?" Said the other person with the craziness in his eyes.

"But, Why? I always love you brother. So, Why.. Why did you do this, Victor?" [Angus]

"Exactly!! Because of that you become Master's favorite student, become the strongest person, and even get Julie's love." [Victor]

"What!! I never love Julie! Wait… Brother!! Is Julie the one that coerces you to poison, me?" [Angus]

"Enough nonsense, now.. DIE!!" As Victor launched an attack toward Angus.

However, Angus still could repel the attack easily despite being poisoned. 

After a few exchanges move, "Hahaha… As expected, the one that inherited the master's power. Even after being poisoned by devil tears, you still could move like that. But now that power is mine!!" Victor attacks his brother while ignoring his wound.

During their exchange, from outside the house heard some noise. *BUK* *BUK* *BUK* a lot of grenades launched inside the house at once. Then, it explodes together. *BOOOMMM*

At the last second before the huge explosion, Angus gathers all his chi power to protect his brother and himself. But, his brother already loses all his reason and keeps attacking him with the poisoned knife.

"Uhuk.. Brother are you okay?!" [Angus]

"Hahaha… Just give up brother! Just give me master's power and I will end your suffering" [Victor]

Looking at his brother already beyond hope to save, Angus punches him in his hearth at fast speed. Before closing, his brother crazed eye.

"ARRRGGHH" Losing his only brother, Angus release surges of massive chi and make an explosion towards the rubble around. *BOOM*

"You bastard!! Why did you do this to my brother?"  As Angus looks at the approaching group.

"Hoo.. truly an embodiment of evil to survive that kind of attack while being poisoned." Said one of the men with shaved heads and wearing thin clothes.

"Angus, there is no other person that is stronger than me in this world!!" Said a muscular person

"Fufufu… that's the price for ignoring me." Said a beautiful woman with a devilish aura

"Hahaha… Look at that power. Now, I'm really hungry to eat you!" said a crazed thin person holding an alcoholic jug.

Looking as more and more practitioners of martial art come with hungry eyes towards him. He finally understood why they come after him.

"I see… So, All of you want is my master's legacy. But, did you think that poisoning me is enough to defeat 10.000 years of inheritance?!" Angus claps his hand and takes his final battle stance.

Soon, the other party attacked him without any shred of hesitation. The group opposition launched their attack be it from guns, grenades, sharp weapons, and various chi-based skills.

Six days have passed since the start of the battle. During these six days, he already lost count of how many people died at his hand. Each minute passes by another life is claiming in his hand. 

He even wonders just how many people they prepare to capture him. The most infuriating him is they seem to lock down the area and cooperate with the local government to do this attack. 

For six days straight Angus continuously fought and passed what was truly human capable of. All his body was riddled with various wounds and blood. Be it from his enemy and his blood.

If he is not poisoned, he could already run away or fight for months. But, each time he used his chi skill base, his body corroded by the poison itself.

"Hold on everyone, he is already at his limit. The 10.000 years' legacy soon will be ours." Said one of the people to encourage themselves.

Looking at the opposition group that fears to attack him. "Hahaha… With that kind of mentality, you will never get this power." As Angus gather all his massive chi toward his heart and explode himself *BOOOMM*

"Shit…" Before the opposition could react, they already got engulfed by a massive chi blast along with the part of the town.

At Angus's last moment, 'Damn… In the end, I really can't preserve my master legacy. Huft… six days huh.. that means I miss the six-day to manage all my idle phone games. 

Funny, I still think about those games… Well, not that it matters now. At least I finally got the peace that I once long for.' As Angus's consciousness plunges into the darkness.

Inside the darkness, Angus lost track of time and control over his body, even his thoughts. Before long he sees a bright light from far away and is attracted to it.

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    万古神帝Golden
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    Not the best writing, as the comments under have said. Everything is chaotic and you have to think or re read it to understand. Like from what I understood his brother(not sure if blood related or just close friend) poisoned him to try to kill him due to being jealous of the love he’s receiving from this girl he likes. Then I don’t really understand what happened but bombs were thrown in and for some reason the MC protects him, then kills him anyways after taking a few more hits? Next the people who threw the bombs come in with guns and stuff and they start fighting, it also turns out that girl who ‘likes’ the MC is a psycho who wants to kill the MC because he doesn’t like her back(or maybe the true reason is she doesn’t like him but is just thirsting after his legacy he got from his master). They start fighting for a while and the MC is so powerful that he kills people 1 after another while still poisoned, but finally can’t hang on anymore and explodes his cultivation.

    The whole sequence is just very chaotic and literally pointless. Like why do we need a whole chapter and also the first chapter, which is the most important and most meaningful since it literally introduces the novel, to show everything that happened that lead to his death. I think it would be better to just start with something like ‘I’m not dead?’, and he wakes up in his new body and thinking of how he died, then the author can just write a few paragraphs explaining that his brother betrayed him due to love while the girl that his brother loved actually schemed against them both just to get his legacy, in the end he took down a few people and had no choice to finally explode himself.

    But for the synopsis to say he’s the strongest person is kinda misleading, he’s the strongest in his world, but if he’s the strongest in existence then that’s really weak, because from what’s shown it seems like he’s in a modern world that has martial arts(due to bombs and guns), or maybe there’s a spirit qi revival, and it seems like his strength is not even enough to punch and break a small mountain.
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    dcd83
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    Yea, the bad grammar is gonna stop me from even trying to continue reading
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    Shiba786
    Shiba786
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    Shittiest grammar ever
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      WaryBaconOG
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      I've seen shittier grammar.
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        lihkin
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        You got an example? I'm genuinely curious how that's possible
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          reckstar4
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          I have read MTL. This grammar feels like breeze.
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            dutyinternal
            dutyinternal
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            reads like google translate
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            Meelemage
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            This is not even translated. It's written in Eng.
            BTW, does it improve in the later chapters?
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