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My Magical System by Fhrutz_D_Hollow

Yeman Talisman was bullied by his classmates and framed by his best friend in his high school... Read more
Yeman Talisman was bullied by his classmates and framed by his best friend in his high school days.

One night, an incident occurred, which he rescued his ex-girlfriend from a drug organization syndicate. Too bad with his bad luck he got killed, when he opened his eyes again, he found himself in a different world? With a gaming-like system!

Let’s find out what will happen to him in this world of fantasy. What if he finds out that his old classmates were the heroes of this new world and their leader was none other than his old best friend who framed him not only once, but twice?

They got summoned here through a magic circle unlike him! What will happen when the system and magic clash?!!! Collapse
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    On hiatus I expect. Webnovel hasn't had an update for months.

    It was your typical isekai, but into a sword and sorcery world. The MC grows quickly due to his system, and is honestly quite OP. He has a dimensional world, can buy facilities like bathrooms, TVs, ect. He stocks the world with his tamed monsters who are evolving into human forms.

    His system is a level system with classes, skills, attributes and the like.

    As far as the plot has been revealed thus far, the empire has summoned heroes from Earth, they are fighting a demon invasion. There is also a rebellion undercurrent with the nobles trying to supplant the emperor by raising beasts to attack towns, cut off supplies of food and medicine, things like that.

    The worldbuilding seems quite brutal. Completely lawless, with nobles able to do whatever they want to commoners. General lawlessness everywhere except for the immediate area of a powerful noble figure. I think the book took this too far - there's no way such a society would exist in reality. Particularly when everyone can learn magic and weapon arts.

    MC is doing his own thing, academy and adventure stuff but it is clear that the emperor is going to find out the two faced nature of the MC's former Earth enemy and seek him out to control the heroes and to help him out with the empire's problem. I think that's how the plot is going to unfold, but no reveal yet.

    It is good reading, a mix of slice of life and adventure I'd say. Too bad it looks dropped/hiatus. I've read a lot worse books than this.
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    #panic# ... Can you update this novel? There about 50 New chapters in webnovel.
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    DrAGOoñ
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    I will make it as short as I possibly can, some will hate me for my views on this novel so apologise for that in advance...I am sorry but I am very dissatisfied and disappointed with this novel.
    I will just point out all the things that turned me off about this novel :
    1. It has short chapters and the author takes a considerably long time to upload even with that short chapters.
    2. The translation is overall bad, seriously.
    3. The plot has a lot of plot holes, and the author tries to make the Mc cool but fails miserably.
    4. The story is relatively slow and filled with pointless things, this shows the author's lack of idea.
    5. Lastly, the romance is terrible! Some might argue that this is not a romance oriented novel as Mc makes it clear that he wants to go to his home planet and live with his one and only lover so in my defence I am not talking about that. What I am trying to say is how girls just baselessly falls in love with a person. And the author don't even gives us a character development about them.
    I had read the story up till chapter 200 hoping to see something good but found none.
    I don't know if the author has any intention of editing it at all but when I am writing this these problems are indeed there in the story.
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      skyvino
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      4. The story is relatively slow and filled with pointless things


      Yes pointless , here sample :
      ~mc has skill can make him invisible and sneak att instant kill enemy at the same rank...
      Nope he didnt used it
      When very weak bandits att.. He flexes for 3 chapters.

      ~ he (with assasin skills) want to kill a elder from strong rich noble family
      guess what mc does?
      ...write a letter ✉️ "i will come to kill u in 3 d"
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    Dogs#it novel, with a stupid MC, and idiotic choices from the author.
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    Kinda got irked when he put his username as Zombie, coulda just put his own name if he was bad at creating names.
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      branng66
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      and expose himself
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        to who though?
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          skyvino
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          To the girl almost kill him
          Hate him
          Bully
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    its enjoyable enough but the bad translation makes it hard to push through
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    decent novel --bad translation but its readable.
    no frills type of novel as long as you don't try to apply logic to anything.
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      kardus315
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      thanks
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    No Harem = Good👌
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      ponpokona
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      No Harem = Bad whoknows
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        оо ты не знаешь что гарем это самое худшая история
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      2. Offline
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        You have a peculiar taste. But I don't hate it.
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      3. Offline
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        Isn't that the most disliked comment on Ranobes? On The Perfect Run?
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          DrAGOoñ
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          Really? How do you know that?
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            Someone else said so and it has around 300
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              DrAGOoñ
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              Wow! That's a lot of dislikes...
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      kardus315
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      good
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      Are you the opposite end of the other guy who on every harem novel comment
      Harem = Good 👍
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        Maybe no? Maybe yes? Only time can tell.
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