Journey Towards Greatness by Evil_God_ZARAKH

Someone is fixing the grammar of this fanfic in webnovel. http://wbnv.in/a/b2hz4Kr

It's a good fanfic but, here's one main problem: pretty much repetitive story. I've read up to 800 chapters, here's a quick summary:

Our Super OP MC has power to control Ommniforce (it's used by all gods & all Pokemon love this force) with a system and super OP body with 9" di*k. He goes around the different region and collect Pokemons and make them super strong then destroy some evil organization. But plot twist, he doesn't kill anybody, so they can create more problems in the future. After winning Pokemon league in a region, he left all his Pokemons and start from scratch then destroy a similar evil organization (who loves to control legendary pokemon for world domination). Also along the way, he fu*k many girls and has three fiances. But his fiances always support him, so he can fu*ck other womens.

That's all. My overall review: 6/10.

there is no harem and only 3 girls according to wiki https://journey-towards-greatness.fandom.com/wiki/Julian i got tricked to think this huge harem but turned out sex friends or one night stand shit

Hello? What about the good reviews for this? I couldn't even get past the first 10 because the grammar and paragraph structure is horrible, it's so hard to read, repeats names constantly and it is written as a total novice, (example: Professor oak got up and went to the car, then professor oak sped up and we got to professor oak's house) The structure is terrible, I don't know if it improves but with this beginning it doesn't make me want to continue

Not to mention how boring the novel would be if the MC didn't have any power since this is Pokémon world, which looks good in games and series but pretty shitty in a novel


2/10

This is honestly so bad that its kinda funny sometimes.
read to waste time, don't forget to turn off your brain. lmao

2/5

Any furry..?

4.3/5
Review from chapter 570 (how the f#ck am i at 570 already)
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cons about the story
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•mc goes around f#cking bitches like there is no tomorrow
•needs an editor. frequent spelling mistakes or pronoun mishaps
•when mc does the pokemon tournament things its quite a snoozefest
•even when mc saves the world the pokemon league is hesitant about letting him do things
•r-18 scenes are 1 paragraph long or leave you with a boner
•scaling makes no fuggin sense, in a recent chapter i read an attack was 2000 meters tall. thats 4.5 times the height of the empire state building
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pros
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•alright fanfic
•gives pretty good explanation on why his pokemon become strong
•once he gets a girlfriend he stops having sex like a rabbit
•ash actually matures and gets stronger (such wow)
•doesnt treat his pokemon as complete shit
•doesnt keep legendary/mythical pokemon he cant handle like a complete dumbass
•mc doesnt act like a beta cuck
•mc doesnt rely on the system too often
•you rarely have to turn your brain off (i.e. gym battles from sinnoh and probably on)
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my biased opinions
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•thank god this shit isnt a cultivation novel im tired of that shit

The fanfic was not bad but the author tends to make the mc ignorant/forget the events to make it longer or to create suspense. The harem could've been better if they were useful in his journey but they're not and I guess their sole purpose is to make this 82 years old man have a real love life in this life as he didn't have one in his last life and cheers to his best friend for having his wife get reincarnated in pokémon world so that the mc can take his turn. Owing the League favours whenever he ask something from them (which is always for the greater good of the people and pokémon not for himself) even though he saved the world multiple times which actually doesn't count because they didn't order him to do it. Sometimes he acts like a hypocrite when he's dealing with bad guys. I mean he literally cripples, mental torture, physical torture and unintentionally feeds one to rayquaza but as long as he doesn't outright kill them with his own hands means he's not a killer and he literally f*cked every beautiful woman at the start but hesitates to add another because of true love (mc best friend's wife that got reincarnated) but then he adds sex slaves to do his bidding, feels sad and guilty because a pokémon got turn into an undead chaos monster but just brush off the elite agents and their pokémon that died when on a hunt for team galatic with Cythia (he couldn't spare a pokémon to help cause why not) but I guess that's okay atleast she's alive and intentionally gives his unofficial first lost in the eyes of the public to her for idk reasons. The way he goes out of his way to help when it's not his business and having time for relaxing mid crisis is so contradictory that it's maddening especially when he acts like he doesn't give a f*ck but he does it anyway to make him seem the good guy.

Absolutely loved it the story might be stretched here and there but its recomendable just wish if someone updates the first chapter or atleast lists out all the pokemon in comment section

Absolutely loved it the story might be stretched here and there but its recomendable just wish if someone updates the first chapter or atleast lists out all the pokemon in comment section

Absolutely loved it the world theme maybe rough around the edges but still recomendable . Only wish sommeone updates the first chapter atleast via comments and list out all his pokemons.

I know some might disagree but I think he should catch those legend and mythical pokemon. Even though he catches them he will let them go like groudon and kyougre. He should catch so they can help in future like groudon helped with giratina. So my request is you can them and let the ones who wants to go join him and use them in his main team.