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    Since the system didn't give the immortal Qi directly and requires him to condense it, could it be gifted?
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      indeed , it can be gifted
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    Indeed, the previous gift didn't yield the desired Immortal Qi. Instead, it gave a one-time passage to another world And a method to condense Immortal Qi. Clearly, he had to work for it himself.

    Author is getting lazy while wanting to lengthen the novel. Creation of a new world for Ye Chen to navigate and get the reward which he was meant to receive via system will totally feel like wasting time on filler chapters. All the extra reading just for him to return to the real world with the Immortal Qi and some other rewards sounds like a lazy writing to me.
    "Increase the Quantity but Decrease the Quality" has never been a good thing in cultivation novels.
    EDIT: My assumptions here have been proven wrong in this instance but I still think of this as a filler chapter (only caveat being it introduces the extreme rarity of Immortal Qi)
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      Bro, how many assumptions is this what, you’re literally assuming all this for what? He will go to another world, that’s just how books are, authors wants to make the book interesting and here you are talking about length like what lmao
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        As I was saying, length is not the problem the quality is. Expanding the world does make it interesting if done right but I have come to understand that most novels can't do it right or do it too late into the story or do it for the wrong reasons. Which as I said, feels like filler or makeshift way to lengthen the novel.
        And, I was making an assumption which I am surprised, I was wrong. But I still feel it was kinda like a filler
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