Chapter 28.3

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    “The Darkness let us out… but why?”

    Wiping chunks of burst canned beef from my face, I answered quietly.

    “It had a mental breakdown.”


    LMFAAOOO WHAT A WIMP ASS STORY
    *I said as I corrected 50th fkin plothole from my 100k+ words fanfic, through snot and tears*
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    type of plot holes you would find in harry potter
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      ????????
      y harrry potter bro
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        I don't like Harry Potter or the author 😭
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    what soleum did will probably will be the standard method from now on, so the ghost will be tormented kek
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    A team = tonnes of points
    D team = less points
    A ✅
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      Side characters = less points
      Main character(plot armour) = more points
      No Need to change, if he does then that is the correct answer✅
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    Noo Soleum dont join them i'll miss D-squad so much if you do ohno
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    Damn Soleum, harsh much? 4 4 Jk, I still love you. cheerful
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    I honestly kinda felt bad for the ghost this time. They just wanted their murder mystery to be seen by someone I bet. Aside from the 'your face is the one used on the victim' nothing about it was that scary or threatening. Poor ghost.

    He's probably gonna say no but I wouldn't mind if he freelances with A-Squad while still being in D-Sqaud. Lizard is just too interesting of an character to not learn more of from up close.
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    It's not a bad choice to be surrounded by middle-aged women. I'll take a deal. welldone wiseacre
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      crazy middle-aged women...
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        Even better
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    Wow promotion!! And poor ghost 😭😭 pressure
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    NNNNOOOOOOO

    SQUAD D is the best. SQUAD D superiors are the best. SQUAD D lizard is the best.

    I don't even know what a f#cking teal duck is finger
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      I think a Teal Duck is a Duck that is the color Teal. Might be wrong not 100% sure, yet.
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