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The Immortal Wife Is Like A Cloud仙妻如云

“Su Jingzhen, you’re not young anymore, and your sister-in-law has come to ask you. Do you want a... Read more
“Su Jingzhen, you’re not young anymore, and your sister-in-law has come to ask you. Do you want a Dao Companion or not?”

“Sister-in-law, who is it?”

“I…”

As a male cultivator, Su Jingzhen had always thought that he would live a peaceful life in the immortal world, but unexpectedly, he became the hardest whetstone to sharpen others. Collapse
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    In the beginning, MC's list of abilities is logically limited. But later on, his dantian is repaired, he has numerous inheritances, tons of resources and an excess of points but still sticks with just body cultivation and one attack. It's really stupid. Even then he doesn't use points on his main cultivation either, even though his enemies are clearly stronger, he wants to 'feel' their strength before using points🤷

    Also there's that point where mc goes from fighting cross stage opponents to author directly deleting a stage and MC's strength becoming average again
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      A typical novel that drags the story. The author has a way out if the MC is too weak, and will restrain the MC if the MC is too OP with stupid and ridiculous reasons.
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    Scurry
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    #panic# chapter 706-708 missing
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    I am at chapter 145 and I like this novel...
    4 🌟

    To those who read further, At wich chapters he fix his Qi core ?
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      +-450
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    Another shit about demonic way is more right, strange mc, cliche and a lot of contrived coincidence (deus ex machina). Don’t recommend
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    Read the MTL till the 1900 chapter (In fact it's like the 900 chapter lf the novel).

    I don't like the MC very much, like he isn't bad, but also not good. He's cautious, ruthless, not that arrogant or impulsive but he lacks charm, he isn't charismatic, nor brave, just like a normal guy, the problem comes that he never tried to improve himself, never learned anything about cultivation, alchemy, battle techniques, nothing, always a clueless guy, he even battles just by being fast and with extremely simple attacks, the enemies he fights are always weaker than him (Yeah, they have higher realms but he wins by stats only) he never fought a true good enemy, he has like 4 guys with names and many chapters behind them with building of villains and he never fought one directly, they just simply vanished before a showdown.

    There's also too many good luck involved. He's one of those guys that walk on the road and the rock they take from the ground is a Divine Crystal, the brick he bought at the start of the novel with hagale becomes even more powerful than his system.

    The author wastes too many chapters on things that are quickly forgotten. Remember the knowledge of his previous life that even the immortal chick was impressed? Forgotten. The improvement of roots with the system? Two times and never again. Soul cultivation? Just a bit to help with a little thing and never again, a mysterious rock that can help his "second Golden finger" forgotten. Dragon blood? Not used, inheritances, alchemy recipes, monster crystals, beast souls... Not a single things is used, just forgotten. He goes to another map to improve and the only thing his "super powerful" sect gave him was a snake, that he only used once. At some point he doesn't even use his system for a lot of chapters storing almost 20k points and the most expensive thing with the system is just 2.2k.

    The MC lacks any ambition or goal, after hundreds of chapters without even remembering the Immortal FL he trains 5 secs the techniques she gave him, just when she was watching or he asks for a pill recipe for an oldman he forgot since the start of the novel just 5 secs before he appeared in front of the MC so he can feel touched. Not really a worthy novel, just junk food.
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      Seriously asking How are you guys able to read MTL for 1000ch ??? How can I learn this power. My brain can't handle more than 30ch
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        Start with decent mtl's (I'd say WN mtls aren't that bad), make your brain adapt to them then go to higher stages.
        Or, brute force it, start with a raw website and google translate that thing and force your brain to adapt.
        Be sure to turn your brain off though.
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      Not to mention the cultivation level of “Out of body” seems to disappear midway through… we initially got to know it was nascent soul, then out of body, then divine will but all of a sudden after going to the tianlong clan, the out of body level disappears and mc is fighting divine will ppl directly, and then he broke through from NS to DW directly.. so irritating evil
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    I am bored. Every event is dragged out too much. Also, I didn't like the system at all.
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    He’s not particularly cowardly he’s just submissive in front of the FLTHE FOLLOWING INFO IN THE SPOILER CAN BE FOUND IN THE FIRST 10-20 CHAPTERS.
    outside of my rant the book is mediocre and knowing galaxyTL quality will prob decline massively or it’ll just get dropped. 2/5 it’s fine in the beginning but it becomes a snooze fest.
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    Cowardly MC! Well not really not cowardly just cautious. Does things when he must!
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    I stopped at chp 124.
    It's very boring to me. Mc just chilling slowly increasing his strength with points.
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      I gave up on chapter 34, as I had already fallen asleep twice while reading, Mac's interpersonal relationship with girls
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