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    Charles Xavier
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    From all of my previous comments, you guys already know i like how the author write the story so far (although there's a problematic things here and there)

    But i really don't like how he played things here. I assumed he accidentally made lin yi so strong because he want to sped up the plot, but now at lost because lin yi will basically solved all problem easily, leaving no suspense.

    So the author choose to made lin yi dumb and slow as hell. I mean, he's really passive here. Lin yi shouldn't be like this. He always decisive at the right time. The moment he felt something wrong and see no risk in it, he'll dive straight to it.

    There's no logical explanation of how he kept things going in the background because we know his personality not changed to be arrogant of his power. There's a lot of ways to prevent this, or at least solved it quickly when reaching this point

    This is just stretching up the plot for the sake of nothing
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