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Prologue
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    Klumsygee
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    Couldn't his father or mother just.. Give their heart?, don't they love him enough?
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    Yuzaki Nasa
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    Perfect translation 👏
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    Pipiper
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    His family was always watching him with worried gazes, waiting for him to break.

    What's the meaning
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      Bekicot
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      In this case, it is waiting for his body to break. A euphemism for death. His heart condition is killing him and it is only a matter of time until his body cannot take it and breaks under the pressure.
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        SundayOwl
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        Don't think so. His body already broken. What they were watching for and simultaneously afraid of was his mental breakdown. He was keeping his feelings to himself and not showing his emotional turmoil, but his relatives were waiting for it and be prepared. He sad, that to make their lives a little bit easier, he always had strong face. So it's not physical breakdown, but mental.
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          Malachai
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          No, it’s a euphemism for death. His family knows he is terminally ill and they aren’t waiting for him to have a mental breakdown, they’re waiting for him to die so that they can be with him at his final moments. This is reinforced by the following line “He knew they wanted to help, but there was nothing they could do, he couldn’t be fixed.”
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    God_Unknown
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    His only hope had been to receive a heart transplant, a feeble hope. He was going to die long before his name reached the top of the waiting list, and a compatible donor was found.


    Welcome to SUS Brazil.
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      MathCoutDe
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      KKKKKK So true
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      Leonardo
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      Br tbm? Foda isso meno
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    Kingcapybara
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    why does every novel I read where the mc is in the hospital he has to dying from some sort of heart disease or a weak physique from birth why cant they die from something cool like brain cancer
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      ErectileReptile
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      I doubt someone with late stage brain cancer would have much of a personality left after their brain essentially destroys itself…
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        k1llsh0t_87
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        I mean they could just narrate his life instead of having the mc think it, have a random nurse, doctor or family member mention it in some way or have the mc think about his past life to explain to us how he died, not like we need the internal monologue as he dies for it to work
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          kringkrong
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          I mean, that wouldn't be an effective way to introduce an mc right?
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            k1llsh0t_87
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            Depends on the execution, I believe that as long as the execution is good you can start a story in almost any way you choose, just because something isn't conventional doesn't mean it isn't viable
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              k1llsh0t_87
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              Although that's just my opinion so some may disagree
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      Open9zz
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      You r sick 🤮 in the head. There nothing cool in brain cancer
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    Mountain Fog
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    There was no hidden meaning. The only answer was that there was no answer. That was it.

    No comment needed. That was it.
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    Angela❄️
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    It has begun hokage
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    Eon
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    Rip
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