The Conceptual Deck by MetaBettaOmegaLetta

Arruinaste la historia al hacer a ema y jarvis novios se siente como que el mc sea desechado literalmente se derrumbo en sus brasos mostrando su lado mas vulnerable y aun asi se fue con otro alguien que es su apoyo emocinal cinfidente y compañera y se fue con otro en retospectiva arruinaste la historia al menos para mi la historia se arruino

This is a pretty decent story. Not great or terrible, just decent. There are some spelling mistakes here and there though that doesn't change much, Character Development is...eh..? I like the characters and how they act but that's really it...? Not to sure. The rest are just meh. Nothing special. It's either to fast or it's just Marvel.
I did enjoy this a lot but it's a shame this is on hiatus. Props to the Author for not ruining this and instead making an chapter that ends things and can also be continued off with when they get ideas

Only 122 chapters and it is hiatus.
I think it's a decent enough book.

Boring writing style. When you come home after work, this fanfic just doesn't fit.

I was reading this a year ago on SpaceBattles, good concept. Not a huge fan of execution though.

Power has so much potential I feel like it wasn’t able to really work through properly

Imma test the waters here mate's! Best of luck to me