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Chapter 8: Past Fragment: Len
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    Atlas
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    cool to see some backstory on Ryan and Lens history
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    Lightningsdr
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    this society is... cruel...
    well all societies are cruei... but this one is bad cruel
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    Avid Reader
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    There can never be a society who all people are equal because all people aren't equal.
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    confused-reader2
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    Ryan is right; Len is too idealistic. The idea of communism is good, but it would only work in a perfect society with perfect people.
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    Kanoh Agito
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    Spacetime powers are always so op
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    Kiyopon702
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    Do it, do it, do it.

    But he chickened out.


    Idk why but it's very funny 🤣
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    Víteliú
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    Honestly, I didn't like this "plot".
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    Kepler_22b
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    Lets say that taking elixirs has a random chance (99.9%) of failing. What if he takes an elixir right after a save point and repeats if the process didn't go well by returning in time? Repeat until you get a power you like without side effects. Who of you would risk it?
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      ElectricEssence
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      And then it turns out that this elixir breaks the power he had before, leaving him with no quicksave
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        Kepler_22b
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        A reasonable thing to fear. I fear it's late for me. You should've said it sooner.
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    awesomejerk
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    This made me sad..outta nowhere
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    Unaffiliated_Busines
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    Len’s dad was no longer a man. Not since he drank one Elixir too many and underwent a mutation. His flesh, organs, and skin were all gone, leaving only a shapeless mass of blood covering the bones. He had become a faceless, crimson puppet, his body constantly fluctuating; he even moved like a string-less doll, his arms flailing like whips. He left nothing behind, no bloody footprint.


    Is he just... Like a water-man made of blood? pressure That's a sight..
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