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The Primordial Record by BRICKTRADER

Rowan kuranes awoke in a new world inside the body of a dying prince. His new body contain... Read more
Rowan kuranes awoke in a new world inside the body of a dying prince. His new body contain terrifying secrets that he has to protect, for inside him lies the key to Eternity.

Rowan must learn to harness his new abilities and fight against his enemies who would stop at nothing to deprive him of his powers.

Yet he must strive to keep a portion of his humanity alive, as he continously evolve beyond godhood.

A/N: There are horror element, including Eldritch Horror from Lovecraft. Fan of blood borne, and abominable horrors that goes bump in the night would love it.

Epic action set pieces, and galaxy wide battles, with an extremely overpowered MC who is a one man army.

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    The captain must have sensed something, for he looked back and around him.
    I don't like sentences like this, idk why
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      It feels like the Author is trying too hard to be perfect in grammar and doesn't consider the perspective of the reader.
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    2/5 rating

    - The writing is too wordy. The essence of what the author is trying to convey is lost within irrelevant, long and wordy sentences which could have been phrased in a much better way.

    - The story itself is confusing and a mix of half baked ideas and contradictory story telling. The goal of a mystery genre shouldn't be to confuse the reader with plotholes and retcons.
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      The transition between scenes is so awful, I didn't even sometimes notice that we are in a different scene.
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    The writing feels off, IDK why, but it feels somehow very bad
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    You want to write a serious novel with Cthulhu and shit? Wear the big boy pants? Supernatural, mystery, horror. Very mature. But then you go ahead and suddenly for no reason add a video game-like menu with stats, skills, passives and titles. Really? So tired of this.
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      Junior! You dare?!
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    wtf the novel is total chaos, I don't understand why is it so messy
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      It's not fast-paced, it's just messy
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    ???????????? is another font.It is displayed properly and can be read in webnovel
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    This confused the hell outta me
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    A Very Confusing Novel...The Translation Is Filled With ????????????????Every Chapter Is A Chore To Read
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      its bugged. they need to fix it
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        I Had A Headache Trying To Read This Thing swim
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      Fixed.
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    Oh, that's not so bad, I read a little on another platform

    Rank C
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    here from Shadow Slave
    Excited to check this out
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      Hello fellow shadow slayer reader! I’ve caught up on SS and trying to find other novels to read… How’s this novel going for you?
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