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My Vampire System by JKSManga

My Vampire System
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The human Race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY... Read more
The human Race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward. Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.

Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves. Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.

But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around. He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete. Collapse
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    2face
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    • 4.3
    4.3
    Dem this novel is Soo great .best of all time
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    Holy Gab
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    • 4.5
    4.5
    This novel is the G.O.A.T,
    NO novel can compare to mvs, it's quite baffling how good it is
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      Kartik
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      Your sarcasm dao nose is unparalleled it seems
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    Liltain
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    Its Average to Above-average novel:
    The author is new I believe, so you can say this novel is just like that. It’s firstly new, has great new content, unique concepts and plot, however, it’s not the best like amber sword or other works that can be solid literature books. It’s a 6/10.

    The reason it’s 6 is because the faults take away so much from the story. Mc a dummy, plot holes everywhere, Some filler is just nonsense. Overall the cons really stick out and are annoying because some don’t change even throughout the story. To me tho I’d say 8/10 because and only because of the vampires part but yeah over all not bad, you can say it’s an early investment to the author.
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    MarshallShaddy
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    I just checked the comments and I see lots of you trash talking mvs... If you don't know then let me tell you, it happens in all novel for it to be really interesting at one point then drop then go up again. All those saying trash about mvs go read the dalki war arc before
    and you'll see how interesting the novel is. Tho the novel can't be compared to other amazing novels out there by wonderful author but this novel is above average for an upcoming authur. Yes I have Heard that the novel was boosted on webnovel but if you look closely you'll see that even tho the novel was boosted it would still come out top 10 correct me if I am wrong. The basic concept of Quinn is First He is not like other MC that are cold take example bloodline system whereby the MC was cold. Second he care a lot about his friends but still
    so I believe the author didn't use any f#cking plot armor in that aspect even
    . Third the book is all about weak to strong, he was blessed with a system that isn't overpowered compared to Rex in Invincible full moon system where his system is f#cking overpowered with even a shop. But Quinn's system is moderate and understandable. Fourth he grew up in a war era so it's expected for him to have the mentality of making peace. As a kid he would always wish for peace. And lastly the novel focus on the development in the relationship between fictional vampires and humans. With all this I believe the book is good not that great but good all in all the upcoming jksmanga tried a lot in My vampire system compared to My Dragon System and you all can testify that.... Not to stress you all in reading too much I'll stop here
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      Macmanuelled
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      What novels can you recommend for me
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        NinjaLink1
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        Lightning is the only way
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      Failed assignment
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      Recommend some books for me pls
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    bakquak
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    As of the latest chapter does mc have a live interest?
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    DrkAvalon01
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    Sorry if my English is bad, I'm French...

    At first I started reading this novel by seeing the number of views on it. I read it. I really tried. But I finally got stopped near the end of the Vampire Worlds arc. To understand the reason, I must speak of what has been called chance. In Wuxia and the like, luck or karma is a concrete energy that exists in the same way as Qi. Also, seeing a lucky or unlucky MC in this kind of martial arts novel is therefore justified. Events that were caused by chance are rather rare in other types of novels, because such events cannot be avoided despite the strength, intelligence or experience of an MC. They are rare because they give no experience to the MC, they are caused by luck or bad luck, and therefore impossible to avoid. We then speak of "author's conspiracy" because these are forced, unpredictable events. Having one, or two in a novel doesn't matter. But having too much is bad, and breaks the immersion of the story. Why am I talking about this? wiseacre

    Because I have never seen SO many hazardous events as in this novel. Most, if not all of the problems encountered by the MC in this story are almost ALL caused by randomness. Or a burst of unexplained stupidity from the MC. See even some illogical elements of the novel. kiaa



    I am far from having listed everything. And I didn't even mention completely illogical elements, like :



    Some might say I'm too hard on this novel. But an author who uses chance events to write his story is, in my eyes, a complete beginner. This kind of mistake breaks immersion, and a story without immersion fails as a story. Being a writer myself, I know what I'm talking about. reader

    Nothing prevents you from reading this novel, if you don't mind the illogical elements. Many loved it, and you might too. In any case, I advise you to read it to make up your own mind. After all, what is indisputable even in my eyes may not have it in your eyes. know
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      JOEMUDA
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      when he started this yep he was somewhat a begginer now its fun to red
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      Holy Gab
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      Yeah yeah, but it's really great now
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        DrkAvalon01
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        I understand, and time better if the sequel is better. But a story is like a multi-storey building, if the foundation is sloppy, then the building collapses. The same is true with a story. If the beginning doesn't make sense, then the sequel, no matter how well written, won't be believable. It might not bother some, but it bothers me personally. "My vampire system" will remain for me only a prototype of a story that the author will have written to practice. Despite everything, I wish you a good reading, and all those who read it, for my part, I will wait for the author to write a new novel, in the hope that it will not contain the same error. Thank you and good reading !
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      SomeoneRandom
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      When you say an author who uses chance events to progress their story is a beginner, what else can one do? I'm kinda curious cause I'm thinking about writing a novel but I'm worried that it might be utter garbage pressure
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        DrkAvalon01
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        Apart from the imagination, you have to be organized. Think about the events that will take place in your novel and write down the details in memos :

        1- Why will this event take place?

        2- What will be the nature of the event?

        3- What are the consequences of the event on your world and your characters.

        It is important to respect the laws of the world in which your story takes place. Also, avoid information stuffing and distribute the explanations you want to convey to the reader by using several script events. Avoid repetitive events as much as possible. Keep a balance between action and quiet moments in your story. It is important to develop a minimum of your characters so that readers feel close to them. Be careful to write down the events that appear in your story to avoid anachronisms.

        And above all, ESPECIALLY, write a correct ending: conclusion + a brief description of the consequences of the actions of your characters in your world (Before my story, the world was like this, after my story, the world became like that. ).

        I'm sure I forgot some stuff but this should already help you a little. Sorry if my english to bad.
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          SomeoneRandom
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          Thanks so much man, those are some great tips, I think they'll be very helpful boast

          That being said tho, could I ask you to elaborate on the part where you said I need to think about the nature of the event? What do you mean by that? I'm just a little confused pressure
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            DrkAvalon01
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            Just what will your event be: A fight? Investigation ? A conspiracy? Crafting? .... It's to avoid getting lost in your story, make memos. Also writing too much is like running too much, put yourself on a schedule, like 2 hours of writing a day. It will prevent you from getting disgusted with writing. Do not hesitate to reread what you wrote the day before when you have a rested mind, you will find errors more easily. Don't hesitate to have your story read to trusted acquaintances to ask for their opinion. In any case, I wish you good luck, and don't forget the essential, it is above all the originality of your story that will count the most. welldone
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              SomeoneRandom
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              Alright man, thank you so much! boast I'll be sure to use all these tips, hope my story turns out good pressure
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    CatsAreOverrated
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    I remember reading a comment here that said that Mc went full circle(basically there was a point where it practically felt like Mc is starting from step one again) could somebody confirm this pls? I read this and dropped at like 600, thought of picking it up again, but what he said was bit of a turn off.
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      4amReader
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      He doesnt restart
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    OwenVici
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    I have never seen an MC that is such an imbecile....... I try to keep an open mind , but damn
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    Krieger
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    Quote: Hansbk
    I think there has been a miss communication... That was the answer...










    You seem extremely jealous.
    I guess those who can't do complain.
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      Fafla
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      What is he jealous of??Writing a shitty novel?
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        Hansbk
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        It doesn't matter what it seems... Each to their own. How u take my comments are up to u.
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    ZAKI
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    Jest tutaj napisane ze My Vampire system ma dostepnych 1605 rozdzialow a widze tylko 1599.
    Jak zobaczyc reszte ?
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