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The Primordial Record by BRICKTRADER

The Primordial Record
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Rowan kuranes awoke in a new world inside the body of a dying prince. His new body contain... Read more
Rowan kuranes awoke in a new world inside the body of a dying prince. His new body contain terrifying secrets that he has to protect, for inside him lies the key to Eternity.

Rowan must learn to harness his new abilities and fight against his enemies who would stop at nothing to deprive him of his powers.

Yet he must strive to keep a portion of his humanity alive, as he continously evolve beyond godhood.

A/N: There are horror element, including Eldritch Horror from Lovecraft. Fan of blood borne, and abominable horrors that goes bump in the night would love it.

Epic action set pieces, and galaxy wide battles, with an extremely overpowered MC who is a one man army.

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    Lordfifth
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    Pros
    Very interesting and detailed power system
    Vast world -multiverse level
    Very op mc
    No harem, ruthless mc
    No young masters or arrogant stupid villains

    Cons
    Biggest problem I have with this novel is writing
    One moment mc is levelling up and about to become stronger. You would imagine mc would finish the power up and fight the enemy after. No, here mc will start to power up and somehow author makes it that he needs fight while powering up. Just halfway through the level, scene changes. You would see some flashback or back story for 15 to 20 chapters. Then resume powering up. Then another flashback or back story.

    It would be one thing if author finished up one even then goes on the next or back story. But author will tease about something important that reader would want to know and won't answer. We see some back story. We go back to the current scene. Author won't even mention what he was about to tell before he cut off the scene. Current scene resumes randomly without the linking or continuing mystery author was about to reveal. This goes on sometimes for 100 of chapters.

    Also so many scene changes and back and forth story telling makes the story crawl at turtle pace.

    In conclusion abrupt scene changes, awkward transition, very very slow progression, over explanation are cons of this novel.

    It makes you frustrated sometimes and you would end skimming chapters.

    Still I would recommend this. World build and power system and mc are amazing.
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    Turtle
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    It's been a while since we've had any more chapters... gloom
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    Blackfyreheir
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    Any romance?
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      Azure Cynex
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      No, the MC is singularly focus on his goal
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        here4mysteries
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        ah I sometimes dont like that.... LOTM was something else, I dont think I'll be able to get thru that again when I know he's not gonna get a fmc at all.
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    User396
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    It's always a bad sign when just judging by the synopsis, you can already tell that the grammar is going to be absolute garbage.
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      Crane
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      Read the synopsis after reading your comment, and you are right, I'd immediately drop it if it weren't for the fact that I'm over a 1000 chapters in already. Slow start but now one of my top 5 novels of all time, no joke, which includes the likes of LOTR, Reverend Insanity, Er Gen's and IET's works. Give it a shot, this is truly a hidden gem. If the author has bad grammar, that definitely disappears within 10 chaps or so. The grammar is mid to high quality from then on so he probably hired an editor or these mistakes were quickly fixed, or they were some early drafts. I'd say the author probably has a pretty decent language level, nothing of the level that the synopsis portrays.
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        Batx58
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        How slow are we talking about
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    DevilCosmos
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    I actually dropped this novel after reading close to a 100 chapters when it first came out. I picked it back up when i had nothing to read and was surprised to find it was not as bad as i expected it to be. I was worried that the author was making him too powerful for the story to last longer, but safe to say, i was proven wrong. It is enjoyable for people who like power trips. 3.5/5
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    Ikechukwu
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    Waste of valuable time
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    Lazy Titan
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    This is definitely one of my favorite novels! Everything kinda connects together, even when you think it might be a plot hole it just ends up being foreshadowing. The characters are well written and the world building is literally the best I’ve ever read. The author is amazing and is a genius at plotting things out. I can’t even think of any criticism because of how great this novel is. It wouldn’t surprise me if the author ended up publishing some day. They could definitely make it!!!
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      Hansbk
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      This is a good sign… i might've stumble upon another gem. A 1k chap long gem. thrill

      Ranobes came in clutch whenever my reading chap is experiencing a famine.
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        Sage_Tersembunyi
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        wiseacre
        Hi kawan bagikan permata itu,jangan kau makan sendirian dan bersembunyi di ujung alam semesta..
        cat
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        FarmingDislikes
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        So does he keep being a loser or does he drop the righteous act? Because right now it looks pretty illogical what he’s doing
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          lovesbingereading
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          He did drop it.
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    Issam2
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    An incomprehensible novel with the first chapters without explanation. There was a fight, and he was like an ancient warrior. What kills me is the blood, and how he moves while he is in an egg, literally incomprehensible.
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      malkdmwpdpoqwmd
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      It probably will make sense in context... And sure, the early chapters were suboptimal and the storytelling convoluted with mysteries and intrigue but the plot twist that everything led up to was quite interesting. Still worth a read, I think
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    Shiki519
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    i just have to say it.. most of the comments haven't even reach the half of this f#cking insane novel..
    so all of them are worthless unreliable oru2x

    imo it has a similar concept from one punch man where the mc is beyond OP..
    this one is even beyond that and with enough details on why mc is so strong and tackling more serious problems like that one time where he lost control of his powers and ended the universe pressure
    on scale or size of the events, it's similar to infinite mana but not so rushed. In the end, it is a good read and that's all that matters, recomend to try to reach half of the novel or volume 2/3.

    honesty this novel deserves more hype, which i think already is, just not on this site
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      Walvd
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      **Yet he must strive to keep a portion of his humanity alive, as he continously evolve beyond godhood.**
      This is what's stopping me... gloom
      Should i give it a try? Is the mc smart? Ruthless? (don't trust tags at all, so i don't even look at them)
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        Shiki519
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        he needs his humanity since the universe will literally end if he let the instincts of empyrean take control, they devour planets like a piece of cake.. at one point mc will go all out and embrace it making him stronger exponentially, also his bloodline abilities at higher levels needs him to control planets by seeding them instead of pure destruction..

        and on this path he will eventually kill a lot of lifeforms, whether gods or mortal creatures, but its not wanton slaughter.. note that gods in this novel is not really God imo, its the same power level as an archmage.
        also mc likes to plan ahead and his bloodlines make it even more easier at later chapters.
        And the author has done it well imo, its satisfying when mc disrupts the plans of a certain individual.

        its best if u reach somewhere before ch200 or volume 2, the issue of humanity will be a focus there and also some side character experienced in battle and bloodshed evaluated the mc based on his behavior like how the mc acts like its nothing after battling and killing for more than 20hrs..
        of course the circumstances at that point is different and eventually even the killings of gods much less mortals become meaningless if u become strong enough
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          Walvd
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          Noice! Looks like worth a read. Thanks for the info welldone
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          Lazy Titan
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          sorry i wanted to ask if the mc is one of those wanna be hero type ones or will he mature to something else because i just started reading this novel and i really like the world budling and the story but the only thing stopping me from fully enjoying this novel is the character of the mc who wants to protect a bunch of people he just met even going as far as risking his own life.
          would be happy if you could answer my questions and sorry for my bad english.
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            Crane
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            Yeah he realised later that his mind was being manipulated so no he's not like that. He's super cold and calculating later
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          Immortal_tiger
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          Ok since u read a good amount when does he wake up from being asleep for dummy long cuz he was absorbing that divine spark and return to his body when he became a mage
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      The Struggler
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      Hi bro,
      The kingdom building tag is there, is the novel following this genre? Like finding subordinates, building army, finding talents, politics etc. Or is it just a straight one man OP mc?
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        Shiki519
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        yeah kind of, mc will have an ability to seed planets and the more the better. But it is not too focused on that imo. And it only happens on quite later chapters after he is strong enough so it's not much explored i guess, also im stockpiling so i am not up to date rn.

        and i think the uploads seem to be faster now, that's nice
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    arz
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    Trash Mc Trash Novel
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      malkdmwpdpoqwmd
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      Why tho?
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