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Loopshard by Dosei

Adam is no one special. He’s just an accountant standing in line at a bakery one early Saturday... Read more
Adam is no one special. He’s just an accountant standing in line at a bakery one early Saturday morning, because his craving for Jameson’s croissants finally broke him.

Unfortunately, fate has other plans for him, as the black cubes show up before he can get his pastries.

The cubes are the heralds and guides of the Trials of Defiance. They’ve decided that Adam, along with every other able-bodied human adult, is to become a Player in their game.

Humanity’s future is at stake and it’s all but inevitable that Adam is going to die.

After all, he’s no one special.

Despite it all, he overcomes the first Stage. He attains some measure of power and then discovers a way to kill the black cube following him around.

The only problem is that killing the cube takes him down with it.

Oh, and it also gives him the power to go back in time when he dies.

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What to expect:
- Infrequent timeloops (but no two loops the same)
- Slowburn narrative
- Weak-to-strong protagonist
- Clear progression
- Roguelite-inspired GameLit (meta upgrades, etc.)
- The existential horror inherent to time-travelling
- Huge build variety (Relics, Weapon Types, Divine Boons, etc.)
- Meta upgrades and recurring characters


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    Slow burn
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    I've read a bit over 100 chapters of this on RR, so firstly, this isn't stubbed last I checked, so ya'll should read there if you can (no offence to Ranobes bow This site does noble work).

    Secondly, this is a mostly good take on the concept of a roguelike time-loop; mechanically, his builds are pretty diverse between runs (Spoilers, off the top of my head, some of his builds have been
    , etc.). All of them are hella distinct, there's rarely repeats, and each class feels fresh and interesting with its own mechanics, and one of the best parts of the novel is easily seeing how the new classes he plays with works. (I call them classes, but they're item-based builds, not skill-points or anything adjacent).

    The world unfolding and Adam growing in knowledge and scope, trying new things and slowly perfecting each 'level' across runs is honestly a very, very solid writing loop. welldone Unfortunately, later chapters of longer 'runs' can feel a bit stagnant, since there's always the idea that he's going to reset, even if Adam himself doesn't view it like that; the concept of how the time-loop works here is very well-thought out to play into the story's narrative.

    That aside, however, I do find characters and the actual writing here to just feel a bit stiff. It's passable, above the average, even, gramamar's great, but as someone who nitpicks, there's just times where characters don't hit as hard as they do, and Adam's mindset can be tough to bear on occasionally (in an intentional way, I imagine), even if he's a mostly good character besides his frustrating moments. The dialogue and character interactions just sometimes don't land for me, though the core of Adam's character (as not an unthinking, unfeeling monster, thank gosh) is compelling, though will be frustrating if you're the sort who can't bear to read about someone who makes mistakes.

    Overall though, I'd definitely recommend this as an interesting take on the tower-climbing time-loop shtick. Stick with it for at least the first couple of his runs for it to really hit the ground, but solid book overall with a couple drawbacks, 7.8/10 personally. hokage

    Happy reading, fellow daoists. reader
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      Thank you.
      This Taoist thanks you for the poison test satisfied
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    Adam


    HEY dont utter the name of that visionary it will attract his gaze !
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    Another time loop Story, any poison testers here
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      Pretty mid.
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        Sigh 😔
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    Wtf... The guy in the cover looks like CDawg.
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      Literally my exact thoughts
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    from what i read on royal road its pretty good
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    Just from the Synopsis seems like a very well thought out book but Rouge lite novels have more often been disappointing, Will this be different? Fellow friends, if you do decide to read, do tell how the poison tastes, I shan't consume it for now, As I am currently savoring Honey. Good luck
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      I was wondering if you would be so kind as to share with me the name of this honey, fellow reader
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        It's Forced to Ascend the Throne after Transmigrating. It is a great Novel, I can attest to it.
        Unfortunately the first 15 to 20 chapter have bad TL, no problem for a regular reader but might cause problem for a new reader.

        Other than that, I say with 100% of my being that it is a VERY GOOD Novel, if you can, do read it. welldone
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          Surely gonna give it a try now, just gonna finish SS and then go straight to your recommendation
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    I don’t know about anything else about this novel but that’s a nice illustration. Rather than half naked girls (bait for horny guys, sometimes me sadly) and ai pictures (lazy, usually shows no care from the author), these types of cover pictures are much better and respectable.
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      Most cover art here are redesigned by panic, and i think this one included
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        Yeah I know about some of the more recent cover arts, usually they have RANOBES somewhere in the picture but I don’t think this is. And I’m guessing panic only makes these pictures with ai when the original novel doesn’t have a cover art. Even then some of these ai cover arts panic made look good, like the one in The Eighteen Levels of Hell: Lying is Forbidden Here. I didn’t know panic made it until I looked a little deeper. Made me question whether that’s really ai or not, but I don’t know why panic would spend money on making art for these novels so I can only assume
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          Panic also makes cover art when the cover art sucks (which a lot of Chinese ones do for some reason)

          This one seems to be at most a modification of the original cover art on RR
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