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Oathbreaker: A Dark Fantasy Web Serial by SovWrites

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Welcome! If you want to jump in without any spoilers, feel free. Otherwise, here's a story primer, with a list of more specifics on what to expect from my work further below.



Our story follows a fallen knight haunted by his past, in a world afflicted by war and supernatural wounds. Alken is the Headsman of Seydis, an executioner tasked by the divine powers of his homeland to hunt dark sorcerers, warlords, and traitors of all varieties, lest they drag the world into calamity.

Once a paladin, this role ill suits him. Forced to cross lines that shake his beliefs, tempted by dark forces, and seen as an ill omen wherever he wanders, his path is often a bloody one. The longer he spends in the shadows of his world, the more he comes to realize just how many have been disenfranchised by the existent order. During his lonely battles through a land haunted by the restless dead and ancient magics, his journey becomes increasingly strange and personal.

Enter a realm where the dead stir in every shadow and brooding demigods wage a millennia long war for a ruined heaven, where blessed knights wield gilded flames and sorcerers battle with weapons forged of their own souls. Enter a world of faustian alchemists, of saintly demons, and of time-weary elves.



From Oathbreaker you can expect:

— A setting heavily inspired by Forgotten Realms, Planescape, Fromsoft games, and authors such as Michael Moorcock and Kentauro Miura.

— A first person POV from an older protagonist who already knows a lot about his world’s history and cultures, who shares this information with the reader as it becomes relevant.

— A mix of action adventure and quieter moments where the focus is on character development. Lore is shared piecemeal, usually only as it relates to a particular arc or character beat.

— A heavy focus on mystery, both with the setting and the protagonist. The main character’s backstory isn’t shared up front, and a lot of the narrative involves learning about him a bit at a time, either from his own narration or other characters interacting with him.

— A semi-soft magic system where many mages manifest unique powers tied to their own soul, or gain unique powers through eldritch pacts.

— Romantic elements. These don’t crop up much until later in the story.

— A variety of supernatural beings, such as elves, vampires, gargoyles, chimera, and trolls. Many are familiar, some are not, and most of the familiar ones have my own twists put on them.

—Nobledark fantasy. This means that the world is often themed around tragedy and horror, but it’s not dedicated to being gritty. There are elements of high fantasy intermixed with the scarier stuff.

—Episodic arcs. Each story arc usually has a specific locale and antagonist or set of antagonists, but certain overarching plots tie them together.

— A long running narrative. I don’t have a specific projection of how long or how many arcs or books, but you should expect this to be equivalent to a long running serialized work.



This is my first web serial! I hope everyone enjoys it. For trigger warnings, readers should beware that there are some heavy topics in here. When I think something might upset certain readers, I’ll put a warning in the author notes above a chapter. If I miss or overlook anything, feel free to let me know in the comments!

I am currently publishing the same story on my wordpress, which is linked below and in my profile. I release three chapters a week on Tuesdays, Thursdays, and Sundays. Thanks for reading!

(I originally had a link to a wordpress, but I'm in the process of overhauling that space. It's not a priority since my readership is all here, but just in case anyone noticed and was wondering) Collapse
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    I can smell the potential, I'll do a poison test for you.
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      apparently he died :)
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      Na na he was buried under a shit pile
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    yoooo unreliable poison tester here , iv'e only made it past arc 1 and lets just say its good but frustrating, mc is all chivalrous and i kinda like his personality very much but he is not really smart, his one of em mc's driven by emotion and unlike other mc's of his kind . that emotion doesn't really grant him any spike in power or a miraculous edge over his enemies hell fool struggles through every battle and he almost got done in by a kid and an old man 22
    , and guess wat he wz supposed to be some badass legendary knight of some order but i feel like he was just leaching off of the aura of the other badass knights in the order but hey maybe more light would hv been shade onto the story in later arcs
    regardless don't rely too much on others reviews especially for a novel called "Invisible Dragon" try it out and test it yrself
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    I recommended it and it's very good. If someone is looking for a real dark and creepy fantasy, then this is it.. The main character is alive and thinking, although he plays the role of a log, follows the code of honor, and is one of the few rays of light in this gloomy world, so do not look for an anti-hero, he has a lot of such enemies, it is very interesting. I've been reading for a long time and I can't name the advantages, except for the fact that it's high-quality, so the students are passing by... Of the cons: the author chose a gradual disclosure of the world, much will not be clear at first. The author has his own jargon in the story, so it is difficult to remember even what has already been said. Although everything is done smartly. Look for chapters with maps, there is a small glossary of the world if you start reading.
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    It's definitely not poison.
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    The tags are definitely appetizing. But I won't venture, I tried reading some chps on Royalroad but I got bored.
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    since it's a dark fantasy i expect mc to be cruel even to child, and old people any poison tester constraint
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      do you think every dark novel is Reverend Insanity
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    It's a well-written story but it's low-key boring. I got to Arc 2 before I dropped
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    Holy crap this is a long synopsis, now got me wondering which novel has the longest synopsis?
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    It's like I am reading a chapter in synopsis... Any poison testers here, not gonna try my hand on this
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    Reminds me of creepy pasta when i was a kid fleshed onto novels so ppl who like dark shit then ur in luck cuz this vould be the 50/50 hit or miss one might wanna try
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