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First Demonic Dragon by AnathaShesha

Carter Williams was your typical twenty year old loser. After a fight in the street leaves him... Read more
Carter Williams was your typical twenty year old loser. After a fight in the street leaves him unconscious he wakes up in the body of a young dragon in an entirely new world.

Armed with a system to assist him and two beautiful wives to support him, Carter vows never to live his life hiding in the dark again as he seeks the title of dragon king. Collapse
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    sebenarnya bagus. Tapi kenapa cara penulis bercerita seperti itu? Benar-benar kacau.
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    Incest?
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    I'm asking, how is this a yuri story? Isn't the main character a man?
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      What Yuri means here is a MC Harem who has a lesbian relationship with each other.
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    A Motherf#cking Dragon (Game of Thrones SI)
    https://m.fanfiction.net/s/14308320/1/
    Is there anything similar to this?
    I don't know any suitable forums, so I'm writing here.
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    #Panic# Update bruh pls
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      Thanks! welldone
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        Gotta say it panic u fr the plug for webnovels
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    This novel isn't Yuri. It's full of the author's wish fulfillment, and fetishizing 'his' women together seems to be a part of this.

    It reads like it was written by an incel, so I did not get very far. If you like unrealistic and brainless wish fulfillment, maybe this is for you?
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      Sounds about right. I think I need to cleanse myself by reading The Invisible Dragon after reading the synopsis for this one...o.o
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        Good idea. That novel is peak! It's even better than LOTM, Reverend Insanity and Shadow Slave! I think I'll go and read it for the 69th time welldone
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          Better than lotm ok have to check it out now
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            Dam after reading it I can truly say I have seen god
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              how did you read it under 4 minutes hhhh
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                Just reading the first chapter leaves you flabbergasted when you read it time starts to flow differently you start to reach different heights trust me just give it a try
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                  already did hhh that's why I asked. who wouldn't read such a masterpiece
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                  Yeah boi
                  welldone
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      He's not just an incel, he's also a victim of bullying who's writing about everything he would do to his bullies if he had power. Furthermore, he's STILL in that situation, this isn't some past issue.

      I acknowledge that it's sad, but ain't nobody tryna read all that. nose
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    Where can I read the MTL version.?
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    What is this gooner shit? The mc tied his hair up and had the girls dripping

    puke troll34
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      It's that Big D energy hhhhh

      But despite the temptation of smutty scenes, I dropped it at chap 2, I think, or something like that. It's trash hokage
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    Not the best but it's and interesting story. I'm at chapter 201 and it's got good parts and bad parts. I personally think that there's a little too much wish fulfillment, plot holes, and an annoying amount of "oh my god he is the most handsome" or shut like that. It's got cool powers and releams. Like the Abyss being different then hell. It seem more like Tartarus, the warp, and H.P. Lovecraft. I'd give it an overall score of 3.5-4. I'd give it read.
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    Ignore the rating, the novel isn't that bad. It only has 2 main problems and a few other annoying things.

    1st problem, the wish fulfillment is on the level of my three wives are vampires but isn't as complex (In fact a lot of this story is inspired by (M3VW). The MC just keeps gathering op powers, keeps becoming more intimidating to other males, keeps becoming more and more attractive to females (which is weird since he was already the the most handsome man alive in the 1st 5 chapters but then evolved again 100 chapters later and somehow became more handsome), but he doesn't become more intelligent like Victor, so it's corny af. It's like a 16 yr old who had a dream to become the universes best male, but this one got lucky to have that wish be granted by a god.


    2nd and bigger problem, there is a lot, and I mean a lot of hate towards humans. The MC was bullied in his old world and gained a lot of resentment towards humans. He goes to a new world and woohoo he's a dragon prince surrounded by dragons and other beast people.
    Everyone else is fine, but Humans just so happen to always be evil in some way. The author keeps going out of his way to make humans do evil deeds just to justify the MC's hatred towards humans. Humans and Angels were the deceptive evil ones, but the cruel demons and the destructive dragons were honest creatures who were more trustworthy and honourable. A disgusting cliche. puke

    But besides all that cringy shit, it's not too bad and there's no problem with the writing skill. At least, it's much better than MTL. Also the powers are quite cool. Just mind the many plot holes welldone
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      "At least it's better than MTL" is not a compliment for an English Original novel.
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