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The Reincarnation of Alysara by Comiak

After being reincarnated as a busty fox-like race in a fantasy world filled with magic and... Read more
After being reincarnated as a busty fox-like race in a fantasy world filled with magic and mysteries Alysara finds herself blinded after getting a cursed skill. Now she must train her ability to sense the mana around her and discover what mana and magic really is to see.

There is no smut in this story and the MC is not a futa.

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    • 3.8
    3.8
    Good character growth and detailed system descriptions, and races are designed very interestingly different from generic races.

    Fight scenes can be a bit too descriptive and a bit boring at times, though overall progression and worldbuilding is done quite well.
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    Review of The Reincarnation of Alysara by Cultivator Wisdom

    Ah, yes. The Reincarnation of Alysara, now my fellow daoist this is an interesting scripture. To the uneducated, it is a scripture of slice of life, to the wise, it should whisper of the nature of Dao, contemplate on what is cursed and what is divine. The nature of mana and eventually the cultivation world, a record of what once was and what it shall be.

    Protagonist: Alysara, an unfortunate protagonist thrust into universal dynamics vastly larger than she is, yet where would others surrender and resign to their fate, she learns, explores deep knowledge and overcomes. A cautious coward, genius inventor and world shattering scholar.

    Side characters: As the story ebbs and flows, the only important characters that will make an impression are Safyr, her kin and Kayefe. The other characters including the parents of our very own protagonist are part of the flow.

    World Building: Thorough the story you will encounter actually good world building. The author really put effort into putting enough depth to not leave loopholes. Understanding of why races are how they are, why people are how they are and etc will more or less come intuitively, it channels your world view to overlap with the one they are building.

    Critic: As one who provides wisdom, I feel the need to chime in, the author could have done better, could have represented the emotions of the characters better, could have made certain moments more epic. If there is anything that drags this masterpiece down, it is the author's lack of proper expression. From what I have seen, they are rewriting this, but only time will tell, for the road of rewriting is long and the author is perhaps procrastinating.

    Verdict:
    Story: 8/10
    Protagonist: 9/10
    Characters: 6/10
    World Building: 9/10

    Cometh and goeth like a spiritual storm, it provides high quality spiritual energy, followed by a period of grinding drought.

    Review by Cultivator Wisdom, Master of Mana, Wielder of Magic, Reader of Infinite Scrolls, Traveler of Universal Cycles.
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    I came for futa, I was fooling myself, until next time
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    Autor:'a protagonista não é futa'

    Site: tag futanari

    Eu: peepo021 peepo013 peepo017
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    It’s a pretty fun read. She doesn’t become instantly OP, everything flows quite well, and in general it is enjoyable and calming.

    As a note for those who are dissuaded by the Futa tag: it’s technically futa, but in reality it’s more just that the entire species have enlarged breast sizes, including the men. Average human males have objectively flat breasts, considering it’s just the muscles there, but Runalymo men just have extra medium boobs. Treat it as if they’re not there and nothing changes.

    Edit: As of Chapter 118, since it's on RoyalRoad, imma go there to read and comment to support the author. Will still be on ranobes for other novels that I can't read without paying for, or for novels that have been stubbed, but if it's on a free site I want to be able to support the author through the ad revenue and all that.
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    • 4.8
    4.8
    top tier character growth and world building, this story legit made me love the characters although some parts of the novel get boring powering through them and getting past the information dumping arcs makes the whole novel so much better
    i really love how much thought is put into the world and power system honestly im shook and impressed the author created this
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    Kiruschka
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    Dropped it (CH.7), as the MC is already too op for me, and it is just no fun to read further. There is just no real struggling, as much as I can see it, even though the MC is a baby right now.

    But when I read that he already got some insane op artifact, I was insanely bored with how his future would be. I really don't like "OP MC," and this just screams it (The same is for blessings and that the goddess is basically looking over him).
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      You gave up way to early, there are a lot of struggles for the MC. Sure see seems OP, but that is relative to those around her. Give it more of a chance.
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    The best part of this is the Magic system, It's pretty intricate and well built, the world building is great too, It's not one of those novels that have a system just because, it builds everything into a coherent whole.
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      I agree the system in this is innovative enough to improve any novel with a mediocre plot and world building to a really good one, gladly this one is above average in those fields maybe i dont enjoy so much the MC until now but that is just nit picking.
      The system get a little out of hand with the wall of messages at some point and that can break your focus in the story a price for consitency that is questionable if it is needed to be paid.

      Overall, is good shit go for it
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    Hurt storm
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    Quote: Corpse
    Спасибо за разъяснение

    de nada
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    Is that yuri
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      Hurt storm
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      Bom de certa forma parece um yuri, mas você deve lembrar que o corpos dos machos mudaram para poder combater a fome na tribo usando o leite que eles tinham nos seios, isso os transformou em hermafroditas
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