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Master, This Poor Disciple Died Again Today by noct

A silly cultivation novel about an airheaded master putting his foot in his mouth and his poor,... Read more
A silly cultivation novel about an airheaded master putting his foot in his mouth and his poor, clever disciple ducking the fall.

In the midst of faking his death, Xiao Hui finds himself trucked and summarily reincarnated into a cultivation world. With great hopes for what is to come, he gets himself taken in by a sect and chosen by a powerful master, but his master seems to have a hole in his brain! What’s a poor disciple to do?

What Hui does best, of course!

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A xianxia comedy in the vein of A Will Eternal and Spirit Blade Mountain!

— Cultivation/progression fantasy

— Neither grimdark nor fluffy, but interwoven with both silly and intense moments

— Not your typical cultivation protagonist

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    • 5.0
    5.0
    That was fantastic. Plot, characters, everything was fantastic! I don't know why the bad reviews. If anyone is looking to read this give it a try its a great novel and its completed as well.
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    • 3.3
    3.3
    Pretty good novel, with great concepts to set itself apart from the usual cultivation genre.

    Novel is mostly comedy based, with a gradual progression and plot resolution (in the early parts).

    It’s great in the early parts until
    , at which point the plot increasingly accelerates and rushes to finish the story. There are some incredible plot points and ideas that the author has, but are poorly executed and are rushed over and revealed way too quickly.

    The early parts of the story feel properly introduced and executed, while the mid and latter parts feels too condensed, and with unresolved plotlines.

    The MC also feels inconsistent at time, cowardly and meek during most parts and then being complete emotionless during other parts, such as
    which feels like a break in character just to make him go through the motions of the plot.
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    alfred68
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    yacan
    Yet Another Copy of Another Novel
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    Read 10 chapters what i find is a little comedy and nothing. A sorry ass novel with a sorry ass mc by a sorry ass author.
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      I agree with this. Everyone keeps talking like this is top-tier comedy and the writing is great… But it really isn’t. The ‘humour’ is very juvenile and not the funny kind either. MC himself facilitates between retarded, cowardly and philosophical without much rhyme or rhythm. He himself is the cause of most of his troubles. Author clearly has no idea on when to be serious and when to be funny, so attempts at humour just felt a bit hamfisted.

      Comparing Bai Xiaochun to this MC is a massive disservice. BXC is a coward, but he also knows when to stand and fight. His unconventional genius leads to humourous situations and when things get serious so does BXC. Here serious situation suddenly becomes funny and vice versa. An arc abruptly ends with MC 'learning' something then he decides to do something utterly retarded cos 'lulz' then gets beat up and nearly killed again. Author is extremely shameless to even put names of Will Eternal and Spirit Blade in the synopsis.
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    I enjoyed the novel so far but at somme point the MC became a big coward with no dignity. I understand being shameless its funny but this man just has no pride being the bitch to everyone who is a little more powerful than him, he says its background back look your master c'mon.😫 Always saying submit for now, calling himself This small cultivator to even mortals .
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    it is better for foreigners not to write Chinese motives. there is a facade, but there is not enough Chinese spirit and color.

    and gg is not reborn, but simply imitates death. generally bullshit novel
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      You are clearly lacking comprehension.You should meditate more.
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      It’s just a novel you don’t have to get so heated.
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        It is because this is a novel that I want it to be of quality to read it, and not some kind of sur or anecdote
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          I’ll have to agree with you not all cultivation novels written by people not from china are good, but one I know you should check out is “journey of the fate destroying emperor”

          I get it, sometime I read a summary and think the story is gonna be good but ends up being trash, It’s pretty annoying.
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            For the sake of you, I decided to evaluate this novel in my viewed, please go to page 6 of the comment, I outlined my thoughts there
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      Oh so there is no hating gays in it?
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    • 4.5
    4.5
    Very funny and very interesting . Mc is sorta a one trick pony and also a little bitch but it makes scenarios funny. The fighting is pretty lame and if your going to read it it’s because of what he says and what he does, along with the very interesting side characters who never fail to make the plot spicy. I would give it 8/10, only needing better fights and for the Mc to become a little bit more. Unique than his one trick. This doesn’t make his one trick uninteresting however which is what keeps it up there
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    Only read 23 chapters, and so far it's f#cking hilarious. The gender bender tag is just him messing around, don't worry about- read up till there and if you like it, keep going. I'll update at ch100.
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    why is this gender bender? and what chapter it happens?
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      one of the primary side characters can swap genders
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    Why this thing remind me "My disciple died yet again"? Nevermind, i don't gonna read this anyway.
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