Records of Dungeon Travel던전 견문록

Just realized this is the novel of the manhwa Dungeon Odyssey

I must have read about 15 Korean novels, about 30 or 40 originals.
webnovel/royal road and many 50++ Chinese novels, only one Japanese.

and one thing I noticed is that in most Korean novels the narration is unpleasant.

the authors jump between the narrator explaining something and the characters talking in a very robotic way.

Scenes are changed and conversations are started very abruptly.

In the same way that dialogues are finished in such a way that it seems like an unfinished conversation was left.

they look like conversations chopped up in the middle of the text of the narrator telling something.

It is not fluid and often seems to have no continuity

Is there no New chapters?

Lack of dialogues dominic