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Chapter 7-9

7 (2002/07/25)

Guys I really gonna stop writing here

bya bya

this is really my first time writeing go easy on me ;-;

and thank u to the persan who keeps tellingg me that he likes me writing

you don’t be disappoints I won’t fail your expecations~~~ okey???|}}

8(2002/07/25)

oh! I suddenly think of awesome story so I’m gonna write.

it’s gonna be awesome~~~

9(2002/07/25)

the invisible dragon turned human was a super handsome he was a super bishie

he was a guy but really he was waaay prettier than girls

he was really pretty the boys and girls all fell for him

but tey couldn’t see him cuz he was invisible cuz he was invisible dragon

but suddenly someone popped up

“Kukekekekekekeke”

it was zerglings and hydras they all came on overlords.

the zergs invaded earth so anyway the invisible dragon

decided to erase them next chapter’s going to be super awesome

it’s going to be a super thrilling battle~~~

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    It's really the comments keeping me going at this point
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    Pacing could definitely use some work. I can tell that the author was new when he wrote this but it's still pretty damn impressive.
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    and thank u to the persan who keeps tellingg me that he likes me writing

    you don’t be disappoints I won’t fail your expecations~~~ okey???|


    This guy better stay invisible or else the whole fandom is gonna jump on him troll8
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    What a plot twist, his handsomeness is invisible, even though he's invisible his handsomeness knew no bounds as even his invisibleness made girls fall for him. Overall story is amazing, just a bit rushed, a bit i say
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      I personally feel like the story is kinda going on a slow phase , I mean just 3 chapters squeezed together as one while 2 of them are just the author preaching the DAO

      Anyways continuuu
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    The AI editor does a shockingly good job of making this novel not sound like it was written by a 3 year old, not that i'm going to use it, this junior needs to glean the true secrets hidden in the sacred texts, this can only be done by reading it in its intended state.
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    This shit is peak
    Absolute cinema.
    Praise to the Invisible Dragon but we don't have dey statue cause dey Invisible Dragon is invisible so we dey see him
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    the comments are lowkey the only actual reason i'm reading this, the comments make the chapter 10 times funnier XD
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    he was really pretty the boys and girls all fell for him
    but tey couldn’t see him cuz he was invisible cuz he was Invisible Dragon

    Hahahahhahahahahahh wow I am honored to be able to read such incredibly awesome writing cheerful
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    I've been putting off this masterpiece for a very long time!!! Now I regret it so much.....
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