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Chapter 1: the beginning

In the Azraeil Empire, nestled in the Duchess’s castle of the Human realm, lay a young boy in his luxurious bedroom. The gold-adorned edges of the room provided ample space for at least seven people to live comfortably. The boy, with chubby cheeks, a cute face, and silver hair, looked no more than eight years old. It was evident that he would grow up to be quite the looker.

However, the serenity of the room was interrupted by the boy’s continuous groaning, frowning, and tossing in the bed, as if in great pain. Suddenly, he jolted up, clutching his head.

"What the hell? Why does my head hurt so bad? What’s going on?" he groaned.

The boy kept screaming in pain for at least ten minutes until he lay limp on the bed, the pain slowly subsiding. He muttered, "Wow...uff, I must have drunk a lot last night," as he lay flat on the floor. However, he soon realized that he was looking at a ceiling that did not belong to him.

"What the hell? Did I drink so much that I came to the wrong house or am I hallucinating now?" he thought to himself.

As he tried to stand up, he fell back, grunting in pain.

"Damn it! My muscles hurt like hell! Did I get into a bar fight? No, that’s not important. The question is where the hell am I?" he wondered.

While lying down and questioning himself, the boy noticed something odd- everything around him looked big. He couldn’t believe his eyes as he slowly raised his hands to see that they were small, white, and smooth. A sense of dread crept over him as he realized that he had become smaller.

"No, it can’t be real, it’s not possible," he murmured to himself.

As the boy was trying his best to push such thoughts away, a voice was heard.

[Ding...]

[Scanning the current world.....]

[Scanning completed...]

[Welcome host!!!.....to your new life]

The system cheerfully greeted him, unaware that these words had crushed all the hope within its host."

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    ggnm11
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    [welcome host!!!.....to your new life]
    why does it sound like hello!!!..... motherf#cker oru2x
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    elengee
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    The "boy" suddenly jolts and starts Turing and tussling as if in great pain....

    "Why does it feels like my mind is exploding...what's happening?.?..?"

    Maths have that effect on you. cheerful
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    Elara
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    In the azraeil empire, within the duchess's castle of the human realm there lays a boy within the mansion of the duchess's.

    The very first sentence of this novel is so bad I don't think I can go on. How many errors are in this one sentence? 5?

    Ignoring everything else, why mention the duchess twice? And then call her place a castle first and then a mansion in the same sentence. Is it a mansion in a castle?

    Fixed it:

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      Jocom
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      Last paragraph shouldn't be in brackets.
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        Elara
        + 10 -
        Those are from the "Spoiler" tag.
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          Jocom
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          Indubitably. Let me just get my red pain and give myself a couple slaps to show how embarrassed I am.
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    ichinel
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    WTF remind readers that they're reading a novel?
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    SHreader
    + 60 -
    #panic# plz update edited chapters
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    Dreak
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    Grammar is...., well, forget it.
    Vocabulary is one grand wonder as well. I mean..., was the ceiling sealed and became a 'sealing'?
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    Phatom Px5
    Phatom Px5
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    Everyone becoming a host... my brother too becoming his wife’s host...and now she cheating on him... lol cheerful ...good luck host don’t get kill by those parasites
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    kvikrapper2
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    as an avid reader himself he had read his fair share of fantasy transmigration novels

    hm... as an avid reader who had read his fair share of fantasy transmigration novels...
    you know, I did it too... Do I need the system and a new fantasy world?... I think, no. I wanna live and don't want to learn all these magic and to face with chines' young masters...
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    Fluxlink
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    Meh probably bookmark this for later use, this opening chap makes me think of a generic isekai system novels.
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    Sylvus
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    Literally 5 minutes into the story and the mc has already figured out that he transmigrated to another world. And I hope the writting style gets better
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