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Forsaken Immortals by Tinalynge

Forsaken Immortals
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Finding an ancient treasure was not as fortunate as one might expect. As soon as Bai Rouyun had... Read more
Finding an ancient treasure was not as fortunate as one might expect. As soon as Bai Rouyun had left the grave, countless sects and hidden families set out to kill her for the sake of obtaining her treasure for themselves.

After months of killing, and leaving a trail of numerous corpses, Bai Rouyun finally could not continue. Unwilling to succumb, she gave up, throwing herself off the mountain top, taking the treasure with her to the eternal grave in the clouds.

However, the treasure she had picked up was anything but ordinary. Soon she woke up in the body of a mute, deaf, and mentally challenged woman who… had just gotten married?

Trying to get used to her new life, swearing to gain vengeance while juggling her newlywed husband, was a task that genuinely required all her wits. Collapse
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    IMWPersonal
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    Really not good on any level.

    The translation is honestly a little worse than an AI translation, barely better than MTL.

    The characters are plain, one note, stereotypical, cliche, and any other descriptor you could use to say they are bad. From the first few chapters you can see how poorly written they are. Their only actions are ones that make the lead characters look a certain way. You want the main character to seem smart even though they are anything but? Just make the other characters absolutely idiotic. Don’t even get me started on the female and male lead’s relationship.

    The story and world background are non existent. Both are made entirely out of cliches and tropes, which could be not bad if it wasn’t for the fact that the only form of plot progression the “author” (I use that title as disdainfully as possible) uses is some inane dues ex machina.

    Not once was there a plot point that foreshadowed any future plot point. What’s worse is that you already know exactly how everything is going to happen because this entire thing uses every bad quality of xianxia/wuxia as if it is something to be proud of.
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    josemi-tow
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    Me gusta muchísimo la historia, una lástima que aún faltan por incorporar muchos capítulos, espero que en un futuro próximo se puedan incorporar a la historia
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    CatsAreOverrated
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    Read until about 230 and though it's been decent so far, I decided to drop since I already know that it would all go bad in the next arcs, why? Because they did that "mc starts in the weakest region" thing, and so once she becomes decent in her own, she gonna get shipped away and it feels like a semi reset
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    Homie_Reader
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    This is a really good novel so I'm surprised by the lack of comments on it. The romance is very fluffy and sweet. The villains are kinda just annoying folks but not too annoying. They get dispatched easily. Great read
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      IMWPersonal
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      Probably because the first 30 chapters are hot garbage. The writing quality is atrocious, the characters are flat, world background is non-existent, and the story isn’t worth caring about when everything else is about as bad as it could be without being illegible.
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    Inanity
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    Male Protagonist? There's female, no?
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    kaicheww
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    HELL YEA ITS FINALLY HERE
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